It’s been a bit since I’ve posted here, but woohoo, Fall Writing Frenzy has arrived! Many thanks to Kaitlyn Sanchez, Lydia Lukidis, and Ameerah Holliday for hosting this inspiring contest and to all the generous prize donors for their support. Here is my entry:
Scarecrow Success By Jill Lambert (197 words) When leaves turn red, I’m stuck out here beside the mailbox, like last year. There’s not a single crow around, but I’m prepared if one swoops down. This is boring. What to do? When mail arrives, should I shout, “BOO?” That would prove I’ve got the stuff out in the field to call their bluff. Through his years of faithful service no one’s seen our mailman nervous. Stinging wasps and barking dogs don’t deter his catalogs. Wait! I hear a VROOM, then SCREECH. Now the mail truck’s within reach. Wondering, will he deliver? So excited that I shiver! I see him pause to take a sip-- something pink is on his lip. I shout, “BOO!” Mouth’s open wide. He jerks his hand back, petrified. Letters fly. He chokes and squawks. The milkshake coats the neighbor’s box. What a riot! I am grinning. Suddenly, the mail truck’s spinning. Bug-eyed, gawking in his mirror-- maybe I appear much nearer. Now he’s weaving down the street in a terrified retreat. Ooh, that booing caused a stir. I’m no scarecrow amateur! In the future he’ll avoid 979. I’m overjoyed! Yes, success! Do you suppose… I can spook a mob of crows?
Jill Lambert 
Thanks for your writings. I am sure children will enjoy the suspense. I loved the way the Scarecrow depicts his adventure with the mailman. The ending is contemplating what is next. Keeps you guessing.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Peggy. I appreciate it!❤️
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So whimsical, Jill! I love this- right down to the pink splash on the mailbox. You’ve nailed the picture with your poem, perfectly!!!
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Thank you for your help, Michelle and for cheering me on. You’re the best!❤️
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It’s nice to see your stories again, Jill. This was so funny 😆. Your story matched this picture so perfectly. An unique perspective and a clever story. I really enjoyed it. My oldest is into playing tricks right now. I will definitely read him this one. Good luck! So much fun to read this one.
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I’m so glad you liked it, Ashley and hope your son enjoys it, too! Thank you for your supportive comments.❤️
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Pretty funny that your comment section is in the form of a letter! This was a fun read, but now who is going to deliver the responses now? LOL. Good luck!
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Colleen…I guess they got a new mail carrier to deliver this!😂
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I love the
“ I shout, “BOO!” Mouth’s open wide.
He jerks his hand back, petrified.”
Point. Between the unique rhyming and the image it evokes, it’s hilarious.
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Thanks so much, Katie. I appreciate it!
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This made me giggle! I would love to read more about this pumpkin’s adventures!
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Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Jill, You write such amazing rhyme that children can relate to. Great job!💛
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Dawn! I so appreciate your support and help!
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Love this Jill. Very fresh idea for a pumpkin to scare the mailman.
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Thank you, Lauri!
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The residents will wonder why their mail is covered in milkshake. I’m sure the mail person doubled back to make the delivery, they never fail, you know! Challenge accepted, pumpkin! –Melisa Wrex @mowrex (Twitter)
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Sounds like I need to get busy on a sequel! Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Melisa!
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Great job with rhyming and with painting an easy-to-visualize scene!
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Thank you, Ruthie. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Haha! What a fun story! Such a mischievous scarecrow. Love your rhyme and clever use of the image, especially the milkshake on the mailbox.
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Karen! I appreciate it!
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